Internal Code: 1IIAD
Essay Writing Assignment
Depression (Dr Lynette Evans)
Discuss and analyse factors that may contribute to depression in adult men. Explore issues of the reluctance of men to seek treatment and any suggested ways to improve help seeking. Beginning references: The references listed are suggestions. All references can be found through the library system.
Introduction –
1 - 2 Explains why the questions being considered are important (not just copying the aim of the essay as stated in the essay guide); Notes what the essay will cover and and defines depression and men and relies upon a range of references 0 -1 Limited and not very convincing version of the above.
Identifying the help seeking difficulties for men-5 marks
has not mentioned help seeking difficulties for men.
1-2 has referred to help seeking difficulties but has not related these to depression.
2.5-3 has identified most of the key difficulties but the explanation and interpretation is limited 3.5-4 has clearly identified help seeking difficulties for men through a number of references 4-5 As above, but has clearly articulated how the amalgamation of information from individual studies should be interpreted
Identifying interventions that have been attempted to assist men to engage in seeking help- 5 marks
has not mentioned interventions to assist men. 1-2 Identified interventions but limited references 2.5-3 has identified most of the key difficulties but the explanation and interpretation is limited 2.5-3.5 has clearly identified help seeking interventions for men through a number of references 4-5 As above, but has clearly articulated how the amalgamation of information from individual studies should be interpreted Conclusions– 4 marks 3- 4 Integration of points raised in the essay and/or a thoughtful reflection on gaps in this area of knowledge and/or excellent identification of future directions 1-3 Generally sound. Has made some attempt to tie things together, but may have not addressed the points deserving of a higher grade. 0 - 1 Mainly just repeating points already made in the essay.
Presentation, Expression, and References –
3-4 Perfect, or nearly so, both in-text and Reference list. Typed, double-spaced, sections start where they should (i.e., new page for references), paragraphs indented, no excessive quotes, word limit adhered to, expression fluent, no typos. Nice linking and own words were used. This is really only for H1 or H2A papers. 2-3 Pretty good, but not as fluent, occasional typo is OK. These would generally be H2B papers. Any of the following referencing issues would reduce them to this category: Poor in-text referencing, doesn’t use hanging indent; not alphabetical, journal title has no capital letters or is not in italics, place/publisher in some way incorrect. May have gone over word limit. 1 or less Pretty ordinary presentation for assorted reasons (mostly reaching none of the above expectations). Zero references, or no reference section. Has definitely gone over word limit.
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